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I wrote a voice over for the intro of my video, as when I recieved feedback it was suggested that the beginning was too long with Carmen walking into the building. I spoke about how having an interview can be difficult. This was to establish what my video would be talking about and then leading into the interview that goes wrong. I also re filmed the parts where I write down what is good or bad in the interview as my handwriting wasn't clear enough before.