Audience Feedback on Final Documentary
Appeal to audience:
Lots of well composed interesting shots of graffiti
The style is very relaxed
Urban instrumentals/ what’s trending amongst the target audience
Participant led, which appeals to the audience
Cutaways stay relevant
Relevance to story
Music connected perfectly to emotion – good flow to documentary
Creativity:
Lots of camera movement
Close ups of spray cans and showing the city as well not just graffiti
Footage on bus
The topic is very unique
Instrumental is urban and relates to audience and topic
Sped up footage
Interviewing an art teacher was good to get both perspectives
Fonts used throughout relate to the topic
Interview supports idea that the street art relates to the artists’ pain/life
Views from teacher/law/criminal(artist) make a good spread across the documentary
Techniques:
Panning and zooming
Good use of changing speed of footage
Sped up footage
Panning shots were very good
Fonts used throughout relate to the topic
Intensions:
Interesting discussion about whether it is art of vandalism and you let the audience decide for themselves and don’t tell them how to think
Could improve voiceovers
More narrative need to fully understand the incentive of the documentary
Showed both sides and got opinions from both points of view on whether it is art or vandalism